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i think the format is good and it's overall an attractive looking resume with a good layout and obviously related internships (you'd be surprised how many junior resumes have internships that are all over the place). I think it's a little wordy. People don't actually read resumes because they look at them either as they are sitting with you or a few minutes prior to the meeting. They look for highlights, so i will look at your school, GPA, Major, and the firms you've worked/interned for at first glance. what i want to know from your internship is - what skills did you acquire? so maybe start each bullet with the skill, i.e. - sum of the parts analysis for $xx mil deal for xyz industry and cut down on the verbiage a bit.
Thanks for the input. I'll try to rework it a little. An alum at GS recommended extending all my bullet points to cover the full line if possible. Would you not recommend this strategy since it makes it wordier?
Additionally, if anybody else can help a brotha out I would really appreciate it.
It's definitely an attractive resume. My advice would be to cut the word count a bit though. It's a massive wall of text that not many people will take the time to read.
Besides that, it looks good.
Sodimize my resume hahha
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