sophomore finance resume

Hey guys, I'm currently applying to a variety of financial summer internships and am getting ready to sending out my resume. What do you guys think? What do you think my chances are of landing something? I'm planning on applying to Federal Reserve Bank of Boston, Metlife, John Hancock, Raytheon, JP Morgan, GE FMP, GS, Citigroup, and a few others.

FYI, my formatting looks a lot better on MS word than it does on razume

And its 2 PAGES long

http://www.razume.com/documents/13348

Comments (14)

Jan 12, 2010 - 3:37am

Where to start
at
1) NO 2 PAGES
2) Font is huge
3) Get rid of objective

      Start there and repost your resume when you are done.
Jan 12, 2010 - 3:49am

you need to make the font big enough or tweak the spaces to FILL 2 pages nicely... other than that looks good

========================================= We are excited to formally extend to you an offer to join Bank of Ameria
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Jan 12, 2010 - 4:24pm

Sorry I should have clarified but when I loaded my resume on to razume the formatting changed completely. My original resume fits on 1 page, so there is actually a lot less white space on the real resume.

What do you guys think about my profile? Do you think I'd be competitive for the internships I mentioned? What areas could I improve on? Also how can I change my wording to further improve my resume? I'd be glad to PM the actual word doc to someone because formatting wise is looks a lot better.

Thanks a lot guys.

Jan 13, 2010 - 12:57am

Add some more detail about what you do at the dot-com. You definitely have enough space to add in two more bullet points to that one.

Also, make sure that the lines from the bullet points are not going under the bullet point when the sentence is longer than one line.

Put a line between the college and high school. Remove the hanging comma on your "proficient in windows.." line.

Jan 15, 2010 - 9:16pm

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