Sophomore Resume - Feedback on what I can improve?
Hey guys, here is my resume. I would love some feedback on what I can improve upon/change to help me land a solid summer internship.
http://www.razume.com/documents/16655
I have a couple of specific questions:
1. I have a full tuition merit scholarship that I received when I graduated high school. It was a local scholarship (my high school gives out one every year to a high achieving student). Should I put this anywhere on my resume? If so where would I put it?
- I am at a loss about what to put for the "interests" section at the bottom of my resume. Honestly, I don't have many hobbies except for playing music (which is already listed) and rooting for my sports teams. What is appropriate to put here?
I have the opportunity to go back this summer to the winery that I have been working at the last two summers. However, I have been told that I should look for a more finance related internship for my sophomore summer. Would you agree?
Don't put "extremely proficient in Excel." You are literally asking to get ripped a new one.
I haven't heard of too many "summer analysts" at wineries. Also, you want to stay objective in resumes - get rid of the 'extremely proficient in'.
Again, the whole "summer analyst" thing really needs to go.
The scholarship is nice, it should be ahead of the Dean's List in your honors section.
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