Successful Cold Email, Now how to close the thank you

Emailed an alum who I had a conversation with on the phone. He was kind enough to CC me on an email to the head of recruiting in a certain department. I am planning to respond in the same email thread to just him with a thank you.

How should I end it?

"Thank you for putting me in touch with Mr. XYZ, I look forward to talking with him. I appreciate you helping out a fellow SCHOOLNAME alum."

Then what? "I hope to keep in touch"? What are some other options?

 

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