trading resume; will give out SB for critique

I would appreciate any critique. I'm from a non target that gets absolutely 0 recruiting and have been doing everything i can to put myself in a good position for ft. Let me know what you guys think and if you know of any places that are hiring

http://www.razume.com/documents/21376

 
  • Dates for work experience are inconsistent. You include the comma after the month on your first two, not your last two. Take those commas out.
  • Might want to consider keeping the format the same on a whole line. You have positions held in italics, but dates are not italics. Maybe just my personal preference, but I think it looks better.
 

I would try to map the results for each bullet, something like:

prepared quarterly reports used by the top management as the basis of a 50m investment

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