Avon Barksdale:

also chill with the caps. for me personally it makes me want to not read your post at all

Totally dawg.

[quote]The HBS guys have MAD SWAGGER. They frequently wear their class jackets to boston bars, strutting and acting like they own the joint. They just ooze success, confidence, swagger, basically attributes of alpha males.[/quote]
 
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  • EXTRACIRRICULAR is misspelled
  • Generally limit bullet points to 1 line (extracurriculars should def be no more than 1 line)
  • Cut down on bullet points (these are internships)
  • "Created and built" 50-75 is repetitive... why not "Built x slides"?... Less is more... you're too verbose
  • You forgot a , after Bloomberg
  • Remove interests, especially magic
  • You overuse ;
  • Write out junior (as opposed to jr.)
  • Fix your dates... graduation Expected May 2014... Oil internship (Summer 2012, September - December 2012, etc.)
  • Improve wording for bullet points (e.g. "Conducted research on equities, bonds, & financial markets while participating in monthly team meetings"... equities and bonds are financial markets so why not just "conducted research on equity and debt markets... also you combined past tense with current (conducted research/participating) so simplify it. Conducted research on equity and debt markets and participated in monthly [investment analysis] meetings (if in the past).
 

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