deadline coming up!! need a good critiquing!!

good evening WSO users i have been reading for a while now and this is my first post so let me get right to it. while i was putting the "finishing touches" on my unedited resume I received a school email(non-target) about a decent PWM internship that i think would be a great opportunity. however my schools career center (edits resumes) is closed until the start of next semester which of course is after the deadline submit our resumes, huge bummer. well not really because i would rather your guys expertise opposed to the schools. i would really appreciate this so please any opinions, recommendations, or questions i am all ears. i am sure i have a lot of mistakes given this is my first trial but i really need this so bare with me haha

p.s.
i had that PWM internship set up for the summer but i tore my ACL and sprained my MCL the month before coming home and he was kind enough as to let me complete it over winter break.