Junior Looking for I-Banking, Consulting Internships
http://www.razume.com/documents/13127
say whatever you want to say, any comments are appreciated to help me improve my banking resume.
http://www.razume.com/documents/13127
say whatever you want to say, any comments are appreciated to help me improve my banking resume.
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I'd say make the descriptions beefier under the Experience and Positions/Awards portions- describe specifics that show how you added value / made a difference. Move SATs to a sub-bullet under education.
also, and it looks like you tried to preserve anonymity by blacking out your name and address, but it wouldnt be hard for someone to figure out who you are - I doubt many people from your home state were rush chair of your fraternity at your school and played tennis there
There's too much white space. It looks like you did nothing for three years. Besides the name on your degree, the biggest thing you have going for you is your experience at the place in Vermont (especially given your GPA).
Talked to parents about rain delays? Yawn. Cut it.
Add more bullets to the Vermont thing. It should be the focus of your resume.
I dont really wanna add too much other shit that I feel like wont be relevant, but i'll definitely add some more bullet points to the internship last year, ill also expand on the frat i guess
good point on the anonymity; for now ill just hope no creep tries to find out who i am and fuck with me somehow hah
and ya GPA is pretty mediocre, ORF with cos is fuckin hell and princeton is pretty gay with grades. wish i hadnt fucked up freshman yr now hah
updated: http://www.razume.com/documents/13128
I would consider moving the positions bullets up to education.
If I were to glance at the first section, I see a great school and a not so great GPA. I'm ready to hit pg down and scroll to the next resume. If you bring up other great campus experience - it provides some sort of explanation to round out your resume.
Use more of your resume building up selling points. What do you want the recruiter to know? The Tennis Pro high school job doesn't really help - and you've already covered that you play tennis.
Ask yourself - what does this resume tell me about why I want to go into Banking/Consulting (resume's should be DIFFERENT) - and why you - what makes you stand out?
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