I think it's fine. I guess the only comment I have is maybe try to give a bit more details on certain points. Like:
"Responsible for client and potential buyers presentations"
well... anybody can write that
"Prepared over 20 presentations overviewing XYZ for clients and potential buyers. Learnt to do ZYX."
I think if you decrease the page margins (look huge) and add more details you're good. Also why "GPA" at EU uni? Is that what you use in Greece?
Also note:
- presentations for potential buyers, or
- potential buyers' (note the apostrophe) presentations
The way Ah see it, is that it took a revolution f a bihllion people for your darn short to work out!
–make the font a serif font (Times)
–your margins are greater than 1". make them 0.6-0.8"
–all bullet points must go at least three-quarters across the page
–bullet points need work. 'Trained mktg team' Trained to do what? How?
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I think it's fine. I guess the only comment I have is maybe try to give a bit more details on certain points. Like: "Responsible for client and potential buyers presentations"
well... anybody can write that
"Prepared over 20 presentations overviewing XYZ for clients and potential buyers. Learnt to do ZYX."
I think if you decrease the page margins (look huge) and add more details you're good. Also why "GPA" at EU uni? Is that what you use in Greece?
Also note: - presentations for potential buyers, or - potential buyers' (note the apostrophe) presentations
IMO don't list the years on your degree. Put down; "Class of xxxx" if it really took 10 years to graduate.
Alternatively you just can take off the part that mentions it is a 5 year program.
I would separate your two degrees if you have two different cumulative grades you can use, or just list the MSc GPA if it is high.
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–make the font a serif font (Times) –your margins are greater than 1". make them 0.6-0.8" –all bullet points must go at least three-quarters across the page –bullet points need work. 'Trained mktg team' Trained to do what? How?
Start with that. Feel free to post it again.
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