Critique my networking email

I'd rather not post it here, but if anyone wouldnt mind critiquing my networking email I would really appreciate it. I'll PM it to you.

I will be a junior next year at a semi-target and am reaching out to alumni and potential connections in preparation of Junior SA recruiting next year.

Thanks in advanced

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