Resume Advice - Very little feedback

Hey guys, I have been applying to several positions but have gotten very little feedback. I was wondering if you could look over my resume and see what I can improve on. Thanks in advance for your time.

http://www.razume.com/documents/12898

6 Comments
 

I think you should put your finance internships before your ATT experience. I was immediately turned off by your ATT experience when i first read it, but thats just me. I would leave the muslim student association out if i were you. Not to be racist or anything, but i feel that its gonna hurt you more than it helps. Also, maybe put your relevant coursework with your education?

 

Your bullet points don't line up... Compare the AT&T bullets to Suntrust.

Add some space between the end of the solid lines and the beginning on the next sentence (i.e. the space between the Line under Work Experience and AT&T).

Education, Work, And Skills should be a little bigger. Maybe just do "Work Experience" and make another section for leadership.

Relevant coursework is odd at the bottom. Add some more interests and play around with your formatting/font sizes.

Its "Suntrust Banks, Inc.". But why even have the "Inc." if your not putting "AT&T, Inc."? I'd go without it and just put SunTrust Bank.

You capitalize alot of words that shouldn't be: "Fixed Income Derivatives". None should be capitalized.

 

also, personally i don't like periods at the end of each bullet.

Look at your first bullet under AT&T.. it should be "thirty hours PER week".. reread everything. make sure grammar/spacing is right.

 

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