Round 2 resume help

Posted resume the other day and made the suggested changes based on comments and pm's. My boss has asked for my resume to submit to his contacts. So I need it to be flawless by the end of the week. Not just formatting (career center has got this covered), but also content. I'm going for IB FT recruiting. Feel free to comment on chances as well, always interested in feedback.

Thanks again

http://www.razume.com/documents/26990

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blastoisewhat is this hockey midget AAA you speak of

yes OP please explain

I didn't say it was your fault, I said I was blaming you.
 

Don't just put 2013..."Expected May 2013"? Also, your most recent experience is too clustered. Break it up with more efficient bullet points.

 

I'll answer all these in one.

  • Yes I'm Canadian
  • No i don't go to Ivey...think further East
  • AAA its a high level of hockey
 
Utilized Standard & Poor's Capital IQ data along with metrics such as; monthly users, ...
... concepts of the second year accounting course; such as, asset write-downs, ...

Read up on how to use semicolons correctly, because you're not quite doing it right. That comma after "such as" is also misplaced.

In general, I'd say you're not really using bullet points effectively: each of yours is just one (very long) sentence. You'd benefit from making each sentence shorter and highlighting key points concisely.

also... perhaps U of T or Queen's?

 

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