OBLITERATE My Resume - SA 2021 S&T & Buyside Recruiting

Hi guys, I'll be applying for SA 2021 S&T and Buyside roles, and I suppose, FT roles for smaller funds. The recruiting timeline in Asia seems to be a bit later than the US or UK, so many of the positions are only opening up now. Just some notes: (1) my gpa has been rounded up from the 3.56~3.59 range up to 3.6, (2) I failed to secure an SA for the 2020 cycle.

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For the 2020 cycle, I did not have my current internship (the multifamily office) and had a gpa of 3.5. I only managed to secure 1 first round interview at a lower BB, and failed to get the offer during the final rounds. Thus, this is likely my best chance of getting in from undergrad.

For buyside roles, I'm thinking of replacing some of the macro research/automation bullet points with VC deal-related points. For S&T roles, I'll leave it as is.

Would really appreciate if you don't hold back, and DESTROY my resume. Thanks!