Hi, I am a student in finance applying for internships at financial firms. Could you please critique my resume?

Fix your spacing, dude. That in itself would get it tossed out at my firm. There is NO reason to have 3 levels of bullet points. Condense that shit. Unless you have elaborate "selected transactions" work, you should only be working with 1 level of bullets. 2b. On that note, things like "customer service" and "configured data transactions" are NOT considered selected experience (unless you'd like to be laughed at). Usually that refers to deals you've worked on. Do not include course numbers/synonyms for relevant coursework. Pointless. Capitalization!

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I feel that you should add more content to it atm. Do you mind elaborating on what kind of internships you are looking for?

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