Weak Experience; Resume Help Wanted
Hi,
I'm looking for an internship this summer (I'm a junior) and know I have weak experience. I'm trying to find a way to make the experience I do have look as good as possible though. I'm having trouble describing some of them through results too.
Feel free to rip it apart. Thanks for the help!
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You talk about the accomplishments you had with chinese, yet at the bottom say you have basic understanding? I would write instead you have proficient understanding of the language. Also, I would only state one GPA, which is your overall GPA.
Thanks for the input. I'm only in my 2nd year learning Chinese, I'm not going to lie about my proficiency. Plus, I feel like "proficient" opens me up to the possibility of being interviewed in Chinese, which I don't feel comfortable with. I feel pretty strongly that I should my business GPA since there is such a big difference between that and my overall GPA.
My $0.02: I'd change the format under "activities". Why do you have a bullet point under a bullet point under a bullet point? Instead, make "University Glee Club" bold and remove the bullet point. Same with "Speech team". Not sure what to do with the last two bullet points, but one suggestion is to make "Musicals:" & "Violin:" bold and write the description after. I think these things would make it easier to read. Right now it's a mess (in my opinion).
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