General Resume Advice

you should include your cumalitive gpa with your major gpa

Even if it is a good bit lower? still above a 3.0 though.

There gonna end up asking for it eventually anyway.

Suggestions on how to better rephrase some of my job descriptors?

I'm not really a fan of the format... try the M&I one. Also random bullet on the bottom with nothing after it...?

Also the line "Congruent with this internship, I was also complete my Junior and Senior year" is obviously wrong, check that.

Thanks Guys. I have made some adjustments. Please see updated version below.

http://www.razume.com/documents/26810

Thanks Guys. I have made some adjustments. Please see updated version below.

http://www.razume.com/documents/26810

wtf is Beta Alpha Si. If you're going to be in an organization, at least spell it correctly. Come to think of it, there are spelling and grammatical errors all over the document.

Did you check out the M&I format? Your resume looks too novelty (and full of lines) right now.

it's not the easiest to read man. everything just exacerbates that - style, layout, format, words.

def get the M&I format and start it over from scratch.

Any reason you don't put your education up top? Should probably just go with the M&A template.

Thanks everyone. I will make adjustments mentioned above and see what I come out with. Obviously this was not anywhere close to a final version. Honestly, I have been very slack and havent updated or 'made' a resume since my sophomore year of college so getting things down on paper was at least a start.

I'm not necessarily trying to obtain a certain position or even specifically IB but just want to have a general semi updated resume.

Is there a particular reason that most people on the boards prefer the M&I template? Just curious.

Thanks!

crazy tough to read man

almost gave up on it lol

Those tables are just ... too much.

I would ding you just because your choice of formatting hurts my eyes. Just update it to something generic, no point in getting fancy I'm only going to spend 30 seconds on it anyways.

Changed the format per suggestions.

http://www.razume.com/documents/27167

Any better?

ANY BETTER?? Maybe a little?

The tense is all over the place under your professional experience. It should all be the same.

Which tense is best practice?

Just testing ya

everything should be in the past tense even if you are still in your current role. Also recruiter want to see what you have accomplished not just what your responsibilities are

What about listing current responsibilities in sections that contain past experiences/accomplishments? how is tense handled in this situation?

Always past tense.

Condense your primary responsibilities. The key word here is 'primary', not comprehensive.

Ok. I've shorten the list. corrected the tense. Razume site isnt working right now but will post corrections when the site gets back up and running. Keep the comments coming. Thanks

http://www.razume.com/documents/27350