Graduating - Please Review Resume

I'm graduating next month with no job and I'm hoping some of you could provide some feedback on what needs to be changed/removed/added. I done all I could to make the best possible and have nothing else to add. Please take a look at the restaurant role, made a few chnages to that recently, I don't know if it looks decent. Also - Manager, Restaurant - doesnt look right, any suggestion?

http://www.razume.com/documents/14745

 

resume seems fine. I mean, you want to keep each bullet point to be able to encompass what you did, why you did it, and what value you added by doing it... all while keeping it concise and still be able to spark questions. Thats the difficult of making effective bullet points. Might want to emphasize more leadership positions. Take off your cumulative GPA, since that is probably turning off a lot of recruiters. Put down under education another section labeling "relevant coursework". etc. if you need further input, pm me.

 

Quo nihil in dolorem quibusdam quidem impedit reprehenderit. Facilis magnam dolorem excepturi qui cumque est. Laudantium dolorem incidunt ratione voluptas eius.

Career Advancement Opportunities

April 2024 Investment Banking

  • Jefferies & Company 02 99.4%
  • Goldman Sachs 19 98.8%
  • Harris Williams & Co. New 98.3%
  • Lazard Freres 02 97.7%
  • JPMorgan Chase 03 97.1%

Overall Employee Satisfaction

April 2024 Investment Banking

  • Harris Williams & Co. 18 99.4%
  • JPMorgan Chase 10 98.8%
  • Lazard Freres 05 98.3%
  • Morgan Stanley 07 97.7%
  • William Blair 03 97.1%

Professional Growth Opportunities

April 2024 Investment Banking

  • Lazard Freres 01 99.4%
  • Jefferies & Company 02 98.8%
  • Goldman Sachs 17 98.3%
  • Moelis & Company 07 97.7%
  • JPMorgan Chase 05 97.1%

Total Avg Compensation

April 2024 Investment Banking

  • Director/MD (5) $648
  • Vice President (19) $385
  • Associates (87) $260
  • 3rd+ Year Analyst (14) $181
  • Intern/Summer Associate (33) $170
  • 2nd Year Analyst (66) $168
  • 1st Year Analyst (205) $159
  • Intern/Summer Analyst (146) $101
notes
16 IB Interviews Notes

“... there’s no excuse to not take advantage of the resources out there available to you. Best value for your $ are the...”

Leaderboard

1
redever's picture
redever
99.2
2
BankonBanking's picture
BankonBanking
99.0
3
Secyh62's picture
Secyh62
99.0
4
Betsy Massar's picture
Betsy Massar
99.0
5
GameTheory's picture
GameTheory
98.9
6
dosk17's picture
dosk17
98.9
7
kanon's picture
kanon
98.9
8
CompBanker's picture
CompBanker
98.9
9
Kenny_Powers_CFA's picture
Kenny_Powers_CFA
98.8
10
numi's picture
numi
98.8
success
From 10 rejections to 1 dream investment banking internship

“... I believe it was the single biggest reason why I ended up with an offer...”