Help with my Resume - Experience in Korea

Hey Guys, I just came back traveling from Asia and ready to go job hunting.

Here is my resume, please tell me what you think :). Feel free to tell me how to improve it.

-My experience in Korea may seem sorta random when compared to the other experiences, but to explain, I was doing some traveling in Asia backpacking and such on the weekends. The best way to travel is to work abroad at the same time to pay for all of the trips

Thank you very much

http://www.razume.com/documents/25059

*EDIT I fixed the link. Thanks once again guys

 

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The formatting is fine. The bullet points for each position needs to be improved. They are all on job descriptions. The bullet for each position should follow: I did XYZ at the company that results in ABC (dollars saving, bring in money for the firm). It needs to be more result oriented.

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