Please review my resume for full-time recruiting

Could you all please take a look at my resume and give me some feedback. I'm applying for full-time opportunities now and could use the help.

I go to a good public school (Michigan, Virginia, Berkeley, or UCLA).

http://www.razume.com/documents/19819

The main part of the resume I want reviewed is the Activities and Volunteer section.

Thanks!

 
Best Response

You activities and volunteer section is way to in depth. Activities and interests should be two lines not 8. Activities and volunteer sections are meant to round candidates out a bit, not take up more space than any of your internships. A few suggestions:

Take out the working out with whatever basketball team as a freshman and that you were recruited by D3 schools before an injury. That isn't very impressive and it takes up 3 lines.

It's fine to mention that you played intramurals but nobody cares that you won the intramural championship as a captain. Most people have played intramurals and know that being a captain doesn't mean anything, you just passed around the signup list and made sure people showed up for the game.

Were you the social and recruitment cabinet member of your frat or your schools intramurals org?

 

GPA is going to hurt you in FT recruiting so make sure you are doing your best to have the resume forwarded via contacts (cold-call alumni, parent's friends, etc.)

Impossible is nothing
 

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