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I just took the last couple days to completely revamp my resume, and it is time to get some critiques. I will be entering my junior year, with one more 6 month internship to go before graduation. Thus far I have done PWM (the brokerage intern position on my resume) and Asset Management (the investment center intern position), with no idea what to do next. I am interested in many finance and non-finance areas after graduation, but I tried to gear my resume to finance, despite my interests in politics and economic development. Right now I am thinking shooting for a SA position in economic research or something. Couple notes and questions:

Since the asset management firm doesn't have instant name recognition, but still has a sizable AUM, should I put the investment orientation and AUM after the name of the firm? Also, I blacked out some of the awards and interests because it wouldn't be impossible to find out who I am. I included the last position, the silent auction manager at an NFL team's games, because of the management experience and since it was very recent.

Any criticism would be much appreciated. I haven't made thorough changes to my resume in awhile, so please rip me apart. Thanks in advance.

http://www.razume.com/documents/21245

 

What do you do during the school year? Resume makes it seem like all you do is study to maintain your 4.0.

I also hate that you put "junior" (delete it and move "expected june 2013" up - they can do the math) and I hate the font. Go with Times New Roman instead.

 

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