SB for Undergrad IBD Resume critique - Please help!

Hey guys

I'm at the beginning of my 4th semester (6 semester bachelor's degree) and I want to apply for IBD offcycle internship positions in my homecountry and in London as well. Therefore, I would be extremely thankful if some of the experienced guys here could take a glance at my resume.

To give you a little bit of an incentive: I still have two SB left for very helpful tips.

One more thing: Please note, that the GPA is country specific and therefore not comparable to the (X.X/4.0) format of the US.

Thank you all in advance for your time and efforts.

Resume: NEW RESUMES ARE IN MY LAST POST

 

The corporate banking position was more of an insight program than a real internship (although it was officially called internship). At first, I even thought about letting it off my resume, but then decided to write two or three sentences about it. Therefore, I'm not really able to further elaborate about the program since it was no real internship and was really short..

But thanks for your response!

 
Best Response

Your heading is a little weird because of all the space on the top right.

Expected Graduation Date

First bullet under Big 4 A reads a little weird.

Fourth bullet under Big 4 B - in a team of five is unnecessary.

Fifth bullet under Big 4 B - consider replacing that sentence with this "Inspected the funds of a leading German mutual fund with AUM of more than €350 billion"

First bullet under Large European Bank is kind of unnecessary.

Everything else looks pretty good. Otherwise, solid experience.

 

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