maybe i should have been more specific, its its a resume tailored towards a potential position as an IB Analyst.

And I may be able to elaborate a little more on other activities, how is it right now you think? (out of 10 for a non target athlete)

As for the school your way off.

Thanks and keep it coming!

 
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indents: ugly

Don't write about exp you haven't done yet. E&Y

The honors section, shorten it a bit so it fits to 1 line - you are wasting space with one word taking up an entire line

Split work and leadership expereince. Work is Work. Leadership is Leadership

Put school of business thing above hockey (unless you think hockey is super important - wasn't for me). Most important things on top.

your bullets need more work. Pick 1 section and emphasize it. I'm pretty lost reading your CV, i don't know what to read. Guide my eyes to the most impressive section you got.

interest: events driven investing? REALLY? you want to pitch me an idea? don't get ahead of yourself. wtf isphysical cosmology. you already have hockey on your CV. Seems like you need to take this section out.

Too- much - hockey. Seriously keep one section to hockey, don't repeat it 10 times. Reading it the first time was enough.

At least 2 bullets for section. 4,5 for the important ones, your financial anlyst one for example and hopeuflly E&Y too.

Your school of business section could be more specific and impressive. I don't beleive you came up with trading strategies. but I do believe you traded a bit and maybe pitched a stock or two. I enhanced my blabhlabla, sounds like BS. don't bother - write things you can back up and specific - like a project.

In fact, write about projects for eachs section.

I would just split up your business school thing to 2 sections.

you need bullets for the description line. yea the first line under your position

 

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