Ha, it's just throwing me off because no school that starts with "University of -------" has won a national championship (in the NCAA or CIS) in the past few years.
The honors section, shorten it a bit so it fits to 1 line - you are wasting space with one word taking up an entire line
Split work and leadership expereince. Work is Work. Leadership is Leadership
Put school of business thing above hockey (unless you think hockey is super important - wasn't for me). Most important things on top.
your bullets need more work. Pick 1 section and emphasize it. I'm pretty lost reading your CV, i don't know what to read. Guide my eyes to the most impressive section you got.
interest: events driven investing? REALLY? you want to pitch me an idea? don't get ahead of yourself. wtf isphysical cosmology. you already have hockey on your CV. Seems like you need to take this section out.
Too- much - hockey. Seriously keep one section to hockey, don't repeat it 10 times. Reading it the first time was enough.
At least 2 bullets for section. 4,5 for the important ones, your financial anlyst one for example and hopeuflly E&Y too.
Your school of business section could be more specific and impressive. I don't beleive you came up with trading strategies. but I do believe you traded a bit and maybe pitched a stock or two. I enhanced my blabhlabla, sounds like BS. don't bother - write things you can back up and specific - like a project.
In fact, write about projects for eachs section.
I would just split up your business school thing to 2 sections.
you need bullets for the description line. yea the first line under your position
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I'm still trying to figure out what school you go to. Minnesota? New Brunswick? Ugh...
Is that the only thing you did as a financial analyst intern and accounting assistant? Also why is this "IB analyst" resume help?
maybe i should have been more specific, its its a resume tailored towards a potential position as an IB Analyst.
And I may be able to elaborate a little more on other activities, how is it right now you think? (out of 10 for a non target athlete)
As for the school your way off.
Thanks and keep it coming!
Ha, it's just throwing me off because no school that starts with "University of -------" has won a national championship (in the NCAA or CIS) in the past few years.
you go to ross and you went to shattuck st. mary's am i rite???
yea u shud expand more on the ey internship. not too much. but wrtie about another project or two. that can't be all you did for three months.
indents: ugly
Don't write about exp you haven't done yet. E&Y
The honors section, shorten it a bit so it fits to 1 line - you are wasting space with one word taking up an entire line
Split work and leadership expereince. Work is Work. Leadership is Leadership
Put school of business thing above hockey (unless you think hockey is super important - wasn't for me). Most important things on top.
your bullets need more work. Pick 1 section and emphasize it. I'm pretty lost reading your CV, i don't know what to read. Guide my eyes to the most impressive section you got.
interest: events driven investing? REALLY? you want to pitch me an idea? don't get ahead of yourself. wtf isphysical cosmology. you already have hockey on your CV. Seems like you need to take this section out.
Too- much - hockey. Seriously keep one section to hockey, don't repeat it 10 times. Reading it the first time was enough.
At least 2 bullets for section. 4,5 for the important ones, your financial anlyst one for example and hopeuflly E&Y too.
Your school of business section could be more specific and impressive. I don't beleive you came up with trading strategies. but I do believe you traded a bit and maybe pitched a stock or two. I enhanced my blabhlabla, sounds like BS. don't bother - write things you can back up and specific - like a project.
In fact, write about projects for eachs section.
I would just split up your business school thing to 2 sections.
you need bullets for the description line. yea the first line under your position
lol before long, half of all applicants will be using the M&I format
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