Hey all,
My thoughts are that I should remove the PWM internship (seeing how it's ages ago) and replacing it with the tutoring gig.
I also feel that some of the bullet points don't sound "concrete" enough. But that was the nature of job, I wasn't really allowed to know too much about the deals the partners were about to make.
Would appreciate any advice on this resume; feel free to tear it apart. Cheers.
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what is March 12 - Dec 14 you started school in march 2012 and are ending school in december 2014?
incredibly unclear
try to organize interests and activities a little more. and personally i think the bullet points themselves (the actual dots) would look better if they were a little smaller.
also, aware.
@matayo: Yep. That's exactly it. Any suggestions on how I could improve the formatting?
@The New Monkey: Will do.
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