please review resume

1. just say Bloomberg, not "Bloomberg Terminal"
2. "prepared internal loan docs" - what does that really mean? you read over stuff.
3. Aided lenders - how? any analysis? way to general
4. overall, not bad but not sure what else to improve it...

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Making your margins so huge just looks desperate.

Change it to "Work Experience" and move your congress work there. Paid Staffer is not a job title, come up with something better. Titling the category "finance experience" just highlights how little you have

Without knowing what you did, I can't tell you what bullets to add, but I'm sure you have more experience than what you are listing.

great job quantifying. however make your dates consistent. "honors" is typically not a separate section in a finance resume. and if you do choose to include it move it under education so everything flows. I would just list them under education under the school you attained them at. Align more of your bullets to the left. This will give you more room to expand upon your experiences. You definitely need that though because you have an excess amount of white space on your resume. nice credentials though pal.

oh yeah. and even though your ugrad major is self explanatory, listing relavant coursework in mathematics may boost this resume as well