Cover letter / resume final critique please (trader trainee)

jjparks

Monkey

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11y

Bruce Wayne:
Atrocious font. And wtf? clock-style bullet points? seriously?
Go to M&I ASAP and use Brian's template.

Thanks for your feedback on the font. I used it after having it recommended from other resume feedback.

The bullet point issue was already addressed in my original post.....

See: http://resume-videos-00.s3.amazonaws.com/Investment-Banking-Cover-Lette…

Sandhurst

Neanderthal

IB

11y

Best Response

jjparks:
Bruce Wayne:
Atrocious font. And wtf? clock-style bullet points? seriously?
Go to M&I ASAP and use Brian's template.

Thanks for your feedback on the font. I used it after having it recommended from other resume feedback.

The bullet point issue was already addressed in my original post.....

Consider improving the format/layout of your cover letter. I've included an example below. Please note - I'm not saying that you should use it as a template for the contents of your letter. Rather, just to get an idea of where to put addresses, the date, and so forth.

"There are three ways to make a living in this business: be first, be smarter, or cheat."

rubyclaire

Chimp

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11y

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