Critique this bad boy
Hey everyone,
I am and undergrad looking for an internship (could be boutique and unpaid) at either IB/PE/HF. Let me know your honest opinion. It's better I get thrown monkey shit here than at the interview room.
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Where is your GPA?
UK degrees have no GPA.
Is the University of London the international program?
Also, you may wish to take finance out of your interests. It seems necessary in my mind, though that may just be me.
Yes, it is the international program. I was wondering if I should put the words "international program" in but then again it seemed rather obvious since I placed Singapore as the country of my education. Any takes on this?
It probably depends on where you are applying. To be honest, at first glance, it appeared as if you had listed the wrong city/made a typo but that was only because I had never heard of the international program. I'm guessing this will be less of an issue if you are applying for an internship in Singapore though.
you have a good resume but you might want to start hauling ass to find an internship
Thanks guys for your constructic criticisms. Keep them coming!
I just woke up when I typed that.
But thanks for spotting even though it's not part of my resume.
They let you fly after 3 months of training?
In RSAF, you take off, fly, and land all by yourself within the first 14 sessions (about 1 month).
Seriously, when I see 7 hours of flight time, I think washout. I mean you didn't even get to instruments which could be interpreted as an asset. I'd drop it or lie about the time and hours.
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