Please tear this resume apart

Specifically targeting S&T but looking into other options as well. Wouldn't mind just getting any job in the NYC area and networking from there.

School is non-target, top 50 and west coast. UBS internship is wealth management and the Capital Markets Internship is a non-bank in treasury.

I already know I'm probably a long shot, especially since applying out of season but I figure maybe I can land something to get myself out there and then apply to BBs in the fall while networking my ass off.

As far as the resume, I'm mostly concerned that it's overly descriptive/wordy. Also, any suggestions on alternative job search ideas in the NYC area for someone graduating in a month with this resume would be appreciated.

http://www.razume.com/documents/21138

 

Drop the selected in work experience or just change the whole thing to professional experience. Also, in interests, markets? I think I know what you're talking about but you should be more specific

 

If you had any leadership roles in clubs at school you should put some bullets for that in a leadership and activites section. The resume is kind of dominated by those 2 internships. Not bad but it would be better to make it more diverse

 

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