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Hello Mr. X,
My name is ________ and I am currently a student at _____ University with graduation in July. I came across your profile and I am particularly interested in learning more about Equity Research covering XXX as it relates to my background. I have previous work experience in ________________ where I provided _____________ to commercial clients. I also have previous internship experiences at _____________ as well as a company called __________ that does X. Can I set up a time with you for a brief phone conversation to learn more about your background and if there are any opportunities at your firm?