Critique My Resume - Looking to enter IB
http://www.razume.com/documents/21947
(**Ignore the word "fake", it's just there to note that my real information has been removed).
I'm looking to enter into I-Banking, although I realize it is highly-unlikely given my GPA. However, I am in general looking for a good firm that acts as a financial intermediary (i.e. Asset Management, research) or a highly analytical finance position at a respected corporation. My ultimate goal is Ibanking, even if I need an MBA before I can get there.
I do realize that the CFA is not specifically geared towards IB, but I'm doing it to open doors and prove my financial proficiency. Whether I go for the actual charter, I will see in time.
A big question I have is whether to leave the "CFA Level I candidate" where it is.
With in mind, hack away!
Thanks
I don't think you should put "The Office" down as an interest.....
I don'r know if this is true, but bankers might be put off by CC things IMO. I have no bias against it, but seems like the a banker would look down upon it. I am assuming you attended the CC and transferred.
Yes, I did transfer. I have thought about taking that out, but I have quite a few accomplishments at the CC (as you can see towards the bottom, I was the student trustee one year). Upon entering into my current university, I have not really achieved anything of true significance (it's hard to get a footing as a transfer). I've done well, but nothing truly notable. So I would like to note my accomplishments at my CC.
i hope for your sake you are a total bro. you will need some serious, rawdog bro-ness to overcome a set of numbers that would bar you from first rounds even in a hot economy.
Don't put CFA exam and Excel Modeling in your interests, you look like a complete lame ass. Change the format to the Mergers & Inquisitions format. Your format seems a little strange. And plus, you can't go wrong with the M&I Format.
No offense, but should I put that I'm into tequila shots and blondes? I'm just joking, but my point is: I don't mind looking like a lame nerd, who will be a great modeling analyst. I definitely respect your critique, but can you define more clearly why I don't want to state those two things?
I'll take a look at the M&I template, thanks.
Sorry, I didn't mean to offend you. I meant you'll look like a complete lameass. Interests are called interests for a reason. People want to work with interesting/fun people. Not someone who loves to read CFA material and do financial models for fun.
Plus, the interests section is to put something where you can talk about and make you stand out. For example...for mine I have kayaking under interests. I have stories where I've kayaked and hiked through the Panama Canal & forest. And I've been asked this. The interests section is there to show that you are a real person.
I see your point. I putt "SKILLS & INTERESTS". I'll think about adding something more fun too.
Some of what I am going to say may seem harsh, but I do not intend to insult you or put you down in any way. Quite the opposite, in fact.
First, if by "community college" you mean a real community college in which really anyone can take classes and associates degrees are awarded than take it off your resume completely. Board of trustees and all. I say this, not because your accomplishments are there are not worthy, but bankers and those in finance are in general prestige whores for better or worse. They will look down on you for having a community college on your resume. Sad, but true. Take it or leave it. Its the world we live in.
Second, take golf sales associate out of your work experience section. You just want to have relevant work experience unless you have no relevant work experience. Put golf in your interests section.
Third, to echo what was said above, take CFA exam and financial modeling out of your interests section. No one is interested in financial modeling, and if you are than you seriously need to re-evaluate your life choices thus far.
Fourth, do not put financial modeling as a skill unless you can model in your sleep. Same goes with anything microsoft related.
Feel free to disregard any and all of this advice if you see fit.
+1
reality check
I would like to take it out, but my accomplishments at my current university are mediocre at best. I don't, and will not, have a footing here. I need to show that I wasn't under a rock from 2009-2010.
I did what I did for a reason, and if they don't like it then too bad.
Thanks for the suggestions. The other stuff I am differently considering. Is there a major reason for the CFA candidacy to be taken out? I'm just trying to express my dedication to the field and working knowledge.
Again, not to be a dick, but that is the worst thought process you can have when looking for a job. You're trying to convince them to hire you. This is going to sound harsh, but even if you are the best person for a banking job there are thousands, literally thousands, of other kids that are capable of doing the same job you are and are willing to play the game. the sooner you learn that the better off you are going to be.
I didn't say to take off the CFA candidacy. I just said to not put it under your interests, because you will come off as a socially retarded hermit who jacks off to financial statements on friday nights. No one wants to work with that guy.
and use the m&i template
as many others have said PLEASE take out excel modeling out of your interests. who the f*** likes to excel model in their spare time?! i know i don't. leave the CFA level 1 candidate on but keep it up top with education. if you do pass the level 1 exam it can really even out your GPA, and make you stand out among your peers. overall you have good experience, but try to add in more points with value related information in your internships. recruiters like seeing numbers/values on resumes.
Instead of taking it out, I've labeled that section as "SKILLS & INTERESTS". I just want to point out that I'm above average in excel modeling.
Think that's ok?
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