Free for all resume review please

Hi all,

Saw this function from way back when it was first created, but never tried it.

Feel free to rip me a new one... as long as you add something constructive about it!

http://www.razume.com/documents/16380

 
  1. For your work experience, why don't you say the name of the bank and indent/bullet point those awkward lines that are just hanging after analyst section?

  2. Also, the locus of your dates are different from education/work experience.

  3. one bullet point shouldnt exceed over 3 lines. 2 lines max.

  4. i would get rid of the period, but its your call.

  5. location of your internships, schools?

  6. you capitalized education/work experience and not other activities. consistency and attention to detail is very important!

other than that, your resume seems strong enough. good luck

 

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