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Hi, so I have not gotten many job offers and am really worried about my future. Is it possible for someone to quickly go over my resume and find out really what I should improve on.
My future does depend on small improvements like this and I needs opinions.



****Sorry About the Format****

First Name Last Name
Phone Number e-mail

To obtain a position at your establishment and contribute to it by utilizing my exceptional skills

* Excellent communication skills (Verbal and Written)
* Team player, fast learner and great at following instructions
* Performing customer related duties in a friendly and effective manner
* Interpersonal, communication, organizational and time management skills
* Proficient computer user (Word, PowerPoint, Excel, Publisher and a Fast Typist)

YMCA - YLC (Youth Leadership Corp) 2008-2010

* Daily Bread Food Bank
* Waiter at the Sunshine Senior Centre
* Assisted hosting Nelson Mandela's 90th Birthday celebration
* YMCA hosted Events - Organizing committee, set-up, clean-up and DJ

Name of High School 2008-2011

* Organized the library of the English Department
* Chess Tournament - Settled scores, sales and managed the finance

Boy Scout Troop - Went camping, cooked and served meals for guests 2004-2007

Name of High School - OSSD and Ontario Scholar 2008-2011
Ryerson University - Mechanical Engineering Sept. 2011

* Honour "L" for Grades 10 and 11
* Numerous Spoken English Awards
* Grade 9 English and Grade 11 Physics Awards
* Level 1(Gold), 2(Gold) and 3(Bronze) Vocal Awards
* Certificates for Science Olympics, Avogadro, Chem13 and Math Contests

* Eco School Team 2009-2010
* Cricket, Swimming (Ultra-6) and Guitar (Intermediate) 2008-2011
* Took music lessons, performed at concerts and won numerous awards 2008-2011

References available upon request

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Comments (15)

  • Nebular's picture

    Use the format on Mergersandinquistions.com. Then people will begin to help you here.

  • OMS's picture
  • MrJetSet's picture

    What job are you trying to apply for?

  • In reply to MrJetSet
    Serendipity's picture

    What job are you trying to apply for?

    This... IBD straight out of High School?

    Also post your resume to razume so we can see it properly formatted.

  • gstackle32's picture

    whatever you do make sure to keep that objective statement in there

  • Macro Arbitrage's picture

    A canuck troll...

  • In reply to OMS
    whichseatcanitake's picture


    I am applying to any job right now. Like restaurants, telecommunication centres etc. :)

  • In reply to Serendipity
    whichseatcanitake's picture

    What job are you trying to apply for?

    This... IBD straight out of High School?

    Also post your resume to razume so we can see it properly formatted.

    No, I don't want to work for a bank

  • In reply to whichseatcanitake
    gstackle32's picture

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