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Hi, so I have not gotten many job offers and am really worried about my future. Is it possible for someone to quickly go over my resume and find out really what I should improve on.
My future does depend on small improvements like this and I needs opinions.

Cheerio,

WhichSeatCanITake

****Sorry About the Format****

First Name Last Name
Address
Phone Number e-mail

OBJECTIVE:
To obtain a position at your establishment and contribute to it by utilizing my exceptional skills

SUMMARY OF SKILLS:
• Excellent communication skills (Verbal and Written)
• Team player, fast learner and great at following instructions
• Performing customer related duties in a friendly and effective manner
• Interpersonal, communication, organizational and time management skills
• Proficient computer user (Word, PowerPoint, Excel, Publisher and a Fast Typist)

VOLUNTEER EXPERIENCE:
YMCA - YLC (Youth Leadership Corp) 2008-2010

• Daily Bread Food Bank
• Waiter at the Sunshine Senior Centre
• Assisted hosting Nelson Mandela’s 90th Birthday celebration
• YMCA hosted Events – Organizing committee, set-up, clean-up and DJ

Name of High School 2008-2011

• Organized the library of the English Department
• Chess Tournament – Settled scores, sales and managed the finance

Boy Scout Troop – Went camping, cooked and served meals for guests 2004-2007

EDUCATION:
Name of High School – OSSD and Ontario Scholar 2008-2011
Ryerson University – Mechanical Engineering Sept. 2011

AWARDS AND ACCOMPLISHMENTS: 2008-2011
• Honour “L” for Grades 10 and 11
• Numerous Spoken English Awards
• Grade 9 English and Grade 11 Physics Awards
• Level 1(Gold), 2(Gold) and 3(Bronze) Vocal Awards
• Certificates for Science Olympics, Avogadro, Chem13 and Math Contests

EXTRA-CURRICULAR ACTIVITIES:
• Eco School Team 2009-2010
• Cricket, Swimming (Ultra-6) and Guitar (Intermediate) 2008-2011
• Took music lessons, performed at concerts and won numerous awards 2008-2011

References available upon request

Comments (15)

  • Nebular's picture

    Use the format on Mergersandinquistions.com. Then people will begin to help you here.

  • OMS's picture
  • MrJetSet's picture

    What job are you trying to apply for?

  • In reply to MrJetSet
    Serendipity's picture

    MrJetSet:
    What job are you trying to apply for?

    This... IBD straight out of High School?

    Also post your resume to razume so we can see it properly formatted.

  • gstackle32's picture

    whatever you do make sure to keep that objective statement in there

  • Macro Arbitrage's picture

    A canuck troll...

  • In reply to gstackle32
    whichseatcanitake's picture

    gstackle32:
    whatever you do make sure to keep that objective statement in there

    Haha! I caught the sarcasm :D

  • In reply to MrJetSet
    whichseatcanitake's picture

    MrJetSet:
    What job are you trying to apply for?

    Restaurants, Telecommunication centres, fast-food shops and departments stores etc.

  • In reply to Nebular
    whichseatcanitake's picture

    Nebular:
    Use the format on Mergersandinquistions.com. Then people will begin to help you here.

    That's a banking site

  • In reply to whichseatcanitake
    gstackle32's picture

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