12/15/11

Hi, so I have not gotten many job offers and am really worried about my future. Is it possible for someone to quickly go over my resume and find out really what I should improve on.
My future does depend on small improvements like this and I needs opinions.

Cheerio,

WhichSeatCanITake

****Sorry About the Format****

First Name Last Name
Address
Phone Number e-mail

OBJECTIVE:
To obtain a position at your establishment and contribute to it by utilizing my exceptional skills

SUMMARY OF SKILLS:
* Excellent communication skills (Verbal and Written)
* Team player, fast learner and great at following instructions
* Performing customer related duties in a friendly and effective manner
* Interpersonal, communication, organizational and time management skills
* Proficient computer user (Word, PowerPoint, Excel, Publisher and a Fast Typist)

VOLUNTEER EXPERIENCE:
YMCA - YLC (Youth Leadership Corp) 2008-2010

* Daily Bread Food Bank
* Waiter at the Sunshine Senior Centre
* Assisted hosting Nelson Mandela's 90th Birthday celebration
* YMCA hosted Events - Organizing committee, set-up, clean-up and DJ

Name of High School 2008-2011

* Organized the library of the English Department
* Chess Tournament - Settled scores, sales and managed the finance

Boy Scout Troop - Went camping, cooked and served meals for guests 2004-2007

EDUCATION:
Name of High School - OSSD and Ontario Scholar 2008-2011
Ryerson University - Mechanical Engineering Sept. 2011

AWARDS AND ACCOMPLISHMENTS: 2008-2011
* Honour "L" for Grades 10 and 11
* Numerous Spoken English Awards
* Grade 9 English and Grade 11 Physics Awards
* Level 1(Gold), 2(Gold) and 3(Bronze) Vocal Awards
* Certificates for Science Olympics, Avogadro, Chem13 and Math Contests

EXTRA-CURRICULAR ACTIVITIES:
* Eco School Team 2009-2010
* Cricket, Swimming (Ultra-6) and Guitar (Intermediate) 2008-2011
* Took music lessons, performed at concerts and won numerous awards 2008-2011

References available upon request

Comments (15)

12/15/11

Use the format on Mergersandinquistions.com. Then people will begin to help you here.

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12/16/11
Nebular:

Use the format on Mergersandinquistions.com. Then people will begin to help you here.

That's a banking site

12/16/11
whichseatcanitake:
Nebular:

Use the format on Mergersandinquistions.com. Then people will begin to help you here.

That's a banking site

and this is a finance website...why are you posting your resume here if you want to work in the restaurant industry? Do you even need a resume to work at a restaurant?

12/17/11
gstackle32:
whichseatcanitake:
Nebular:

Use the format on Mergersandinquistions.com. Then people will begin to help you here.

That's a banking site

and this is a finance website...why are you posting your resume here if you want to work in the restaurant industry? Do you even need a resume to work at a restaurant?

Isn't it more "are you willing to wash dishes for 8 hours a day for minimum wage and take shit from the chef/sous chef?"

12/17/11
Serendipity:
gstackle32:
whichseatcanitake:
Nebular:

Use the format on Mergersandinquistions.com. Then people will begin to help you here.

That's a banking site

and this is a finance website...why are you posting your resume here if you want to work in the restaurant industry? Do you even need a resume to work at a restaurant?

Isn't it more "are you willing to wash dishes for 8 hours a day for minimum wage and take shit from the chef/sous chef?"

I thought this was a website where people can review your resume :P
My bad. Well, I will have to work at a restaurant since I haven't held a single job ever in my life.

12/15/11

troll...

12/16/11
oldmansacks:

troll...

I am applying to any job right now. Like restaurants, telecommunication centres etc. :)

12/15/11

What job are you trying to apply for?

12/16/11
MrJetSet:

What job are you trying to apply for?

This... IBD straight out of High School?

Also post your resume to razume so we can see it properly formatted.

12/16/11
Serendipity:
MrJetSet:

What job are you trying to apply for?

This... IBD straight out of High School?

Also post your resume to razume so we can see it properly formatted.

No, I don't want to work for a bank

12/16/11
MrJetSet:

What job are you trying to apply for?

Restaurants, Telecommunication centres, fast-food shops and departments stores etc.

12/16/11

whatever you do make sure to keep that objective statement in there

12/16/11
gstackle32:

whatever you do make sure to keep that objective statement in there

Haha! I caught the sarcasm :D

12/16/11

A canuck troll...

12/16/11
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