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I used a resume review services, please tell me which aspects from each resume you would use (notice the different formatting on the states for college location). Please note this resume is for consulting, not IB

Pre-Review
http://www.razume.com/documents/25478

Post-Review
http://www.razume.com/documents/25479

 

Overall there isn't that much of a difference but I'd take the second version, looks more clean.

[quote]The HBS guys have MAD SWAGGER. They frequently wear their class jackets to boston bars, strutting and acting like they own the joint. They just ooze success, confidence, swagger, basically attributes of alpha males.[/quote]
 
helpmepleasethx:
Yeah, I was planning to remove all the periods if I use the second version. Does the 2nd version look too cluttered? The font size is smaller and the margins are smaller in order to jam in more information.
That was my personal impression; I actually found the second harder to read. Some of the wording is a bit different, but not really enough to be noticeable if you just wanted to go ahead and use the first.
 

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