WSO Author has revised his resume; SBs to any advice.

http://www.razume.com/documents/26366

I think it's 99% there. I received a comment today from a recruiter that I need to do Training The Street to make up for my Political Science background...when I explained to her that I did both FactSet AND Wall St. Training, she said she didn't notice it because it was beside college (a.k.a. the first thing on my resume...). Is this just an isolated incident or do you guys think it's legitimate to miss this pretty apparent part of my resume?

School is non-ivy target, last entry is a social fraternity...all you need to know.

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kidflashI'd put it under technicals skills or make a separate certifications section, both under 'Skills & Abilities'
See I had this before and everyone was like "no, put it first because it's very relevant, don't bury it below all that other stuff"
When I read over my friend's resumes, i always look at the top, skim the middle, and look at the bottom for interests. Putting it right next to interests on the bottom should ensure it actually gets a glance atleast, I think.

Otherwise, I'd make another line under GPA. So, Bachelor of Science GPA Certifications

 
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kidflashI'd put it under technicals skills or make a separate certifications section, both under 'Skills & Abilities'
See I had this before and everyone was like "no, put it first because it's very relevant, don't bury it below all that other stuff"
When I read over my friend's resumes, i always look at the top, skim the middle, and look at the bottom for interests. Putting it right next to interests on the bottom should ensure it actually gets a glance atleast, I think.

Otherwise, I'd make another line under GPA. So, Bachelor of Science GPA Certifications

Yeah this would work but it'll be hard to make that extra space.

Anything on content guys, or is it good to go? I need to make sure I get interviews (shooting for MMs) come recruitment, and I'm doing A LOT of networking...just want to know this resume will get there. Thanks.

 
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Vontropnats
kidflashI'd put it under technicals skills or make a separate certifications section, both under 'Skills & Abilities'
See I had this before and everyone was like "no, put it first because it's very relevant, don't bury it below all that other stuff"
When I read over my friend's resumes, i always look at the top, skim the middle, and look at the bottom for interests. Putting it right next to interests on the bottom should ensure it actually gets a glance atleast, I think.

Otherwise, I'd make another line under GPA. So, Bachelor of Science GPA Certifications

Yeah this would work but it'll be hard to make that extra space.

Anything on content guys, or is it good to go? I need to make sure I get interviews (shooting for MMs) come recruitment, and I'm doing A LOT of networking...just want to know this resume will get there. Thanks.

Content looks fine, but I personally think it looks a bit cluttered at the bottom. I'd take out the honors section. Your GPA implies you'd have honors during college. If you have a legit SAT score, stick that in next to your gpa. I'd divide up your work experience and leadership experience. put your frat and department of civil engineering sections under leadership experience.
 

I would seperate your second section into "expierence" and "activities" (and you can make a "other activites" section under the bottom section). I know that this goes against the M&I format you implemented, but it has worked very well for me.

Kudos to what was said above.

 

I don't think she missed it because it was in the education section - I think she missed it because it was in the same line as GPA, and seems at first glance to be extraneous detail about your university. If the point is that this training compensates for your unrelated degree, I would definitely keep it in the education section. Just create a second bullet so it stands out. Maybe make up for the lost space by shortening the engineering internship section.

 

Quick notes:

  • Put the month and year you graduated, not the range of dates.

  • Your WSO bullets need to be in present tense.

  • In general it just seems bland.

MM IB -> Corporate Development -> Strategic Finance
 
SECfinanceQuick notes:
  • Put the month and year you graduated, not the range of dates.

  • Your WSO bullets need to be in present tense.

  • In general it just seems bland.

  1. Told not to do that previously
  2. Everyone says consistent tenses are important
  3. You always post very negative resume reviews -- how about some advice instead of saying "bad"?

Cheers.

 
Vontropnats
SECfinanceQuick notes:
  • Put the month and year you graduated, not the range of dates.

  • Your WSO bullets need to be in present tense.

  • In general it just seems bland.

  1. Told not to do that previously
  2. Everyone says consistent tenses are important
  3. You always post very negative resume reviews -- how about some advice instead of saying "bad"?

Cheers.

  1. We’ll just have to agree to disagree then. The only time I see people use that convention is when they have transferred/for study abroad.
  2. Consistent tenses are important – except when you have a current position. You’re doing all these things right now, so it makes sense to put them in present tense.
  3. I think if you look back at my reviews you’ll find I generally post constructive reviews. While this wasn’t necessarily true in your case, I think it’s incorrect to say I am generally negative. And I didn’t say bad, I said bland. I think you could do a lot better, especially on your M&A bullets. The effort is there but the execution is lacking right now. The accounting bullet is a snoozer man. There’s no need to mention how many drafts of the CIM you produced – just say you conducted due diligence and drafted the product and business section of the CIM. Same thing with precedent transactions – say you researched precedent transactions and developed a comps library. What did you use to pull the Yahoo info, VBA? JavaScript, SQL? Say so. I don’t have time to go through the rest but I hope that helps.
MM IB -> Corporate Development -> Strategic Finance
 

I'm guessing you stuck with one-line bullet points on purpose, but your second experience seems a bit heavy on the points - if you're not averse to it I think your 4th and 5th bullet points could be combined. Regardless, I think the last 2 points seem like they would better belong in the middle from a chronological perspective.

as a small nitpick, our school harps on us to never use articles (a/an/the) in resumes. maybe worth considering because it compacts it a little, makes it sound more resume-y, but if it throws your spacing too much then don't bother.

For your fraternity experience, I wouldn't use "Overachieved" as a verb. Maybe it's just me but it sounds a bit pompous/douchey. "Surpassed" or "Exceeded" might do better here.

 

I've been told by recruiters that I should add my certificates in the education section. That said, Separate each of them in individual lines. It will create the illusion of a heavy weight something. (I know it's sad, but even HR at work said the same thing)

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  • Put your ACT score
  • Drop the second decimal from GPA
  • You need the Wall St training stuff to be on a separate line - was that actually through university?
  • Did your transaction close? All of your bullets are focused on it, and I don't know the first thing about what you actually did - it took you and a team of three interns two months to do what an analyst should be able to do in an hour. I definitely don't care how many drafts you did, and if it was only 7, that's not impressive. Show results, show what you learned, tell a story. This should be the key point of your resume
  • Don't like "acquired knowledge," this doesn't tell me anything
  • Again, try to show you actually made a difference at your internships - rather than simply passing through tasks, you actually made something happen
  • If you're considering trading rather than IBD the poker should be more prominent somehow
 
drexelalum11- Put your ACT score - Drop the second decimal from GPA - You need the Wall St training stuff to be on a separate line - was that actually through university? - Did your transaction close? All of your bullets are focused on it, and I don't know the first thing about what you actually did - it took you and a team of three interns two months to do what an analyst should be able to do in an hour. I definitely don't care how many drafts you did, and if it was only 7, that's not impressive. Show results, show what you learned, tell a story. This should be the key point of your resume - Don't like "acquired knowledge," this doesn't tell me anything - Again, try to show you actually made a difference at your internships - rather than simply passing through tasks, you actually made something happen - If you're considering trading rather than IBD the poker should be more prominent somehow
These are all fantastic points, but honestly, it was a boutique internship -- I have already fought hard to have what I have included on my resume, but I didn't do enough in the 5 weeks I spent there to really change anything or have any sort of impact. This was true at my engineering internship, where I led a project that resulted in new legislation, but in my IBD internship...honestly just going through tasks. The firm didn't use CapIQ so I created new templates for comps and precedents using a little bit of VBA magic, but that's about the biggest impact I had...
 
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AndyLouisthat "WallStreetOasis.com Contributing Author" looks pretty sweet up on top of experience... if that doesnt get you an interview I dont know what will :)

Andy, I sent you an email about interning and you never replied. Why you no like me?

never saw the email! i wrote you back,
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