I don't know if it's like this for everybody but it's hard to read the text. I assume tinypic resized the image. Maybe upload it on razume instead?

Under my tutelage, you will grow from boys to men. From men into gladiators. And from gladiators into SWANSONS.
  1. Add results to the key point of what you accomplished otherwise it's just useless jargon
  2. Add which industries you have researched/have experience in
  3. Consider adding courses taken in finance and accounting since you have no real financial analysis experience, your ratio calculations notwithstanding
 
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Good start on your CV. some suggestions:

  1. Do you have grades yet for Cambridge? If so, include.
  2. Combine second and third lines under College into one; i.e. remove spacing between A-level grades and seperate using commas and then put ranking after a semicolon. (English 98/100, History 99/100; among...)
  3. For Work Experience - your employer should be at the start of each entry in bold, not your title. Your title will go down to where the company is now. Consider right-aligning the location, so that it is under date.
  4. Try to quantify your experiences. How many companies did you analyse? What were some of your key findings? Was your research able to assist the team in closing a $2bn deal (for example)?
  5. After "Work Experience," the next section should be what you're calling "positions of responsibility." You should rename this as "Leadership Experience" or "Extracurricular Activities"

Hope this helps. Assuming you're applying in EMEA, know that most programs are rolling and many have already started and/or finished interviewing candidates for summer internships. Good luck and let me know if you have any other questions or if you want thoughts on a second draft

 

Some formatting issues: 1) lose the spaces between bullets and beginning of writing 2) make sure descriptions stop before the dates begin 3) clean up overall format 4) check grammar

I think the main thing you need to fix and focus on is quantifying your results. When you are writing a resume, you want to make sure the descriptions are based on accomplishments and actual results instead of just your job description

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