Rising sophomore hoping for the best... please rip this a new one
Applying to some BB rotational programs within the next 2 weeks and looking to apply to a few MM IBs/PEs... added some new content since the last time I did this so please destroy this
Just a few suggestions. -Bold one or two key words per sentence. -Remove unnecessary words and shorten your sentences (Resume feels too claustrophobic at the moment). e.g. in the Education section no need to use Academics and Test Scores to describe GPA/sat scores etc. Cumulative GPA can be written as CGPA and possibly moved in with another line. Maybe shorten the Math/Writing/Critical Reading to M/W/CR and see how it looks. Same goes for the other sentences in work experience/leadership section. Trim the unnecessary fat.
Tinker around with this kind of stuff, will take some time and effort but will make it much easier for other people to read.
Disagree with above - do not bold any words in the sentence... I think the layout and experience look great. This is probably one of the better college-level resumes I've seen... nice work
One comment though - and this may be personal preference - I like to keep my present experience in present tense vs. past tense...
agreed, this is a pretty solid resume.
Also... not that it means anything, but when I opened this I thought for sure you had stolen my resume and used it as a template - the layout and flow are nearly identical... I just have six years experience on you ;-)
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Thanks, Patrick
Thanks a lot everyone!
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*sorry about that my phone froze, and I accidentally posted...
2300: (M800, W800, CR700) is a nice way to condense it. Remove the SATIIs too.
And with that score - How are you only at a semi-target? And what's with a 3.61?
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