hey guys,
im a sophomore applying to all the rotational programs, and other various mid-market/bb firms. i was hoping to get some feedback on my resume, as well as chances for those kinda programs? i go to a target school.
also, the associate role at the boutique banking firm is because they offered me a job to continue after the summer and jsut changed my title to that-not trying to bs anyone.
thanks so much!
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please take the community svc hours out...
I think your text could use some work, but I'll let you figure that one for yourself. Make sure to stick to the same tense... "helped" "assisted"... And you use periods in some places and don't in others, be consistent. You also aren't consistent with using the colons either. This might be because of razume, but the bolding is also inconsistent. Should also put in a "Interests" section to talk about hobbies or something. All this volunteer work is just overkill, slim it down. And I agree with above post, remove hours.
great! thanks for the advice!!
should i take out the section completely or just the qualified hours?
do u think i might get an interview with the soph programs with a resume like this? if not, what skills/activities should i focus on building?
If the community service was from high school I'd say get rid of it completely, if it was recent maybe include a single line with the hours and principle functions.
nah its from college. kk!
At first glance:
Let me know if you need more help.
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