I am starting network for the first time and would like to get some critic for my template. I am a just starting college and hope to find an internship for next summer.
Dear Mr/Mrs X,
Hi, my name is ___________, a student at Berkeley City College majoring in Business Administration. I found your contact information on _____ as well as the alumni database. I am highly interested in the investment banking industry and specifically the mergers and acquistions field. I know you are busy and understand if they can't make the time - but I would really appreciate it if you could be open to a brief over the phone or in person next week? I am eager to learn more about your undergraduate experiences at ________ university and about your role at ______ bank. Thank you for your time and help.
- a. Can anyone help me find people's email from
b. Does it have be someone in N.Y or is S.F good enough? , , or any other in the S.F. area, and also how do you find emails the proper way?
- Do these people have to be Associates, VPs, or MDs, or can it be an analyst?