Updated Big 4 with FDD experience (2 month rotation)

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This is my updated resume with FDD experience added. I just completed a rotation and am thinking about whether or not I should start interviewing (otherwise would have to go back to audit and if lucky get hired full time after busy season)

I am wondering if I should narrow the side margins on the work experience. When I print it out it looks kind of skimpy. Should I narrow them and add more wording?

Any advice would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks!

http://www.razume.com/documents/27807

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Oct 1, 2012

Don't use the same type of bullets for your jobs and then for what you did on the job as well. I'm assuming these are different jobs at the same firm? Fix that junk where it's all spaced out down in the charity work portion where it says "as well as." You only have one bullet at the energy company, that looks strange to me. Or was it a role you did at the Big 4 firm? It's confusing right now. You might want to beef up the section about the middle market bank.

Oct 1, 2012
TDSWIM:

Don't use the same type of bullets for your jobs and then for what you did on the job as well. I'm assuming these are different jobs at the same firm? Fix that junk where it's all spaced out down in the charity work portion where it says "as well as." You only have one bullet at the energy company, that looks strange to me. Or was it a role you did at the Big 4 firm? It's confusing right now. You might want to beef up the section about the middle market bank.

Thanks for the advice. The three sub-categoris are all within PwC - I changed the bullets to make it a little easier to follow (hopefully)?

Also, I reduced the MM bank experience to one line, b/c it was in 2008 and in a recent interview, it was brought up, then they were like 'oh, well geez, that was a long time ago', so I am actually contemplating taking it out entirely.

Any other comments would be greatly appreciated!

Oct 2, 2012
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