Please tear apart my Résumé
Graduating from my MBA program in December and looking for some help with my résumé. Thanks
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Graduating from my MBA program in December and looking for some help with my résumé. Thanks
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| Resume PDF.pdf 129 KB | 129 KB |
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There is a lot of "space" on your resume. I would reduce some wordage from the fraternity section and bolster your work experience with more tangible, measurable examples of success. Also, add more personal information (i.e. languages, interests, etc.)
Wheels up for next few hours but at first glance, couple of comments... pls see below:
Touching down in ~4 hours and can review in more detail at hotel. Pls courier a copy to Four Seasons and have concierge deliver.
Mny thx.
I like the format of your CV. Everything is done in one page.
I would immediately delete any email with an attachment called "ResumePDF.pdf". It's 2013; that level of computer illiteracy is unacceptable.
Put education at the top of your resume.
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