Can some real estate people take a look at my resume and tell me if I'm making a fool of myself or not?

"Ronclue" CRE could you take a quick look?

When do you need it by? Typically, resume review is a paid service here on WSO too, so it's a bit of a grey area.

Overall, I would be inclined to move some of your "leadership while in school" items to the school section not the professional section, but that's really just an opinion. It's not wrong how you have it and I would never count that against you if I was reviewing your resume. Reading it top to bottom though, at a first glance it looks like you did nothing in school when really you did a lot.

Put some numbers in your analyst role bullet points too. How many buildings? How many units? Quantify the JLL deal somehow - it's a big deal. Same with the others. What are those corporate sponsorships worth? What did you work on with the NAIOP challenge? What kind of moose do you hunt? Those sort of things.