Can someone please DESTROY my resume?
Would be appreciated a lot
Would be appreciated a lot
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Haha, looks like the wording of these resume critique requests is getting more and more violent/sadomasochistic.
I think using the first person is a big no-no.
Throw some figures into the IPO case study.
Yes, first person is a no-no. Also, a $1,000 scholarship seems hardly noteworthy.
No skills/hobbies section?
no more room. and i'll fix the 1st person
get rid of the honors line. none of those are impressive.
use room you've now created to add a skills/hobbies section.
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