Critique my Resume Please

I was recently laid off by a large consulting firm and just finished updating my resume. Please have a look and leave as much feedback as possible. I will also answer any questions you may have asap. Thanks in advance.

Note The resume looks to be 1 line over 1 page when uploaded onto this site, but it's normally 1 page

http://www.razume.com/documents/10241

3 Comments
 

You need to include educational info (GPA, scores) - without it, it will be difficult for recruiters to know where you're coming from.

There are too many spaces in your resume. You can single space the blocks of description. Gives you more space to add more info.

Your resume says you're applying for a technical position. You need to provide more detail about your level of proficiency/expertise on the different languages and programs.

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Sorry breakingbankers,

After re-clicking my link, I realized the url was incorrect and linked you to another persons resume. I just corrected the link and would greatly appreciate it if you could re-review my resume. Thanks so much for your inquiries.

 

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