Could you please review my resume ?
I dont mind criticism as long as its constructive.
I'm aiming at either consulting or commodities trading.
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oh my... you might consider dropping hope for the commodities trading part
There is no space between the bullet points and the educational establishment in the education section but there is a space between the role and description in work exp.
Seems like you are trying to take space up. Elaborate a little more. For example in the temp sales job, list any achievements. Gathering potential clients to sell crap to is, well, your job. Telling me that you had the best quarter in sales is another thing. Drop 'basic dutch' - if its not business fluent, its not worth listing.
Thanks Rumples. Unlike some other users you gave me some constructive criticism so SB for you. I removed the dutch language and fixed the spacing issue. Concerning the electricity software sales entry, it was a temp job for a small firm; and quite frankly it was quite a crap job. I am thinking of removing it and elaborate on other parts of the resume.
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