Note: This score is based on a subjective assessment of three different criteria all on a 1 to 5 scale (1 = poor, 2 = below avg, 3 = average, 4 = very good, 5 = excellent) based on my own experience reviewing thousands of resumes in the past and based on the current state of the posted resume.
Some explanation of the grading:
1, Wording/Bullets: This score represents the overall wording of the bullets and content throughout the resume. Are there action words? are the experiences explained clearly? Does the candidate quantify their impact where possible?
Layout/Format: This score represents to overall layout and format. Finance professionals are notorious for being anal. Although this score is somewhat subjective, there are certain things we look for including consistency, spacing, clean look, clear sections, proper order, good margins, etc.
Overall: This score represents the experiences and school of the candidate and is the hardest to change in the short term. Improving the Wording/Bullets and Layout/Format scores can bump this grade up (usually by 1 grade at most), however, this grade depends largely on the School, GPA, Internships, Leadership, Extracurriculars of the applicant, etc.
We are going to try to provide a candid / direct grading system for as many resumes as we can in this Public Resume Review forum, with the hopes that it will lead candidates that need help on #1. and #2 criteria to consider the WSO Resume Review service that has experienced professionals ready to help bring the #1 and #2 score as close to a 4 or 5 as possible. Due to time contraints, I can't provide more detail and I can only provide this grade to each candidate once (if you try to repost and updated version under a different username, i will recognize it and ignore). What I will say is that if you aren't at a 4 or 5 in Wording and Layout, we can probably help you make significant improvments.
Some more guidelines for total overall score:
3 - 6: Needs MAJOR help / improvements in several areas
7 - 8: Has some major flaws but also has some good areas
9 - 11: An average to slightly above average resume that could still use some help but it is on "ok" shape
12 - 13: A competitive resume that should be able to land some competitive interviews
14 - 15: An impressive resume on all or almost all levels. Wording/Bullets/Layout/format and overall experience, grades, school, etc are all excellent or very good.
We suggest if you score in the bottom 3 categories listed above that you strongly consider the WSO Resume Review service. Whatever you decide, best of luck!
Cum in et quo et officiis consequatur rerum provident. Minus est illum quisquam perferendis quasi ut repellendus. In voluptatem fugiat quas vitae quo dicta. Dignissimos sint quam deleniti esse dolor. Enim pariatur est rerum porro est.
Suscipit aspernatur ratione autem rem. Aut sapiente sunt quia asperiores iure quia ut. Qui tenetur illo quos aliquid magni rem. Laboriosam incidunt consequatur dolorem nihil aut vel aut. Asperiores aliquam aut repudiandae similique quis dolorem.
Quasi corrupti similique quasi iure iusto aut ut. Eveniet officia dolor itaque adipisci nesciunt incidunt ut sed. Sit blanditiis laudantium amet qui repellat et. Sapiente aut tenetur magni reiciendis esse tenetur et. Officiis quo sunt qui fuga. Tempora qui doloremque est nihil.
See All Comments - 100% Free
WSO depends on everyone being able to pitch in when they know something. Unlock with your email and get bonus: 6 financial modeling lessons free ($199 value)
Sorry, you need to login or sign up in order to vote. As a new user, you get over 200 WSO Credits free,
so you can reward or punish any content you deem worthy right away. See you on the other side!
Looks pretty solid for a freshman. Aim for a fall/spring internship if you can juggle it.
Get to networking and try to get an internship this upcoming summer.
PS - Kudos on the Kendrick Lamar.
Not bad for a freshman, get involved with clubs at your school, develop leadership positions.
Looks good. Two quick critiques:
1) line up your bullets that are on the same leve (i.e. those in education and work experience) 2) don't have one word on a line.
WSO Resume Review Score*: 11 (out of 15 possible)
Some explanation of the grading:
1, Wording/Bullets: This score represents the overall wording of the bullets and content throughout the resume. Are there action words? are the experiences explained clearly? Does the candidate quantify their impact where possible?
Layout/Format: This score represents to overall layout and format. Finance professionals are notorious for being anal. Although this score is somewhat subjective, there are certain things we look for including consistency, spacing, clean look, clear sections, proper order, good margins, etc.
Overall: This score represents the experiences and school of the candidate and is the hardest to change in the short term. Improving the Wording/Bullets and Layout/Format scores can bump this grade up (usually by 1 grade at most), however, this grade depends largely on the School, GPA, Internships, Leadership, Extracurriculars of the applicant, etc.
We are going to try to provide a candid / direct grading system for as many resumes as we can in this Public Resume Review forum, with the hopes that it will lead candidates that need help on #1. and #2 criteria to consider the WSO Resume Review service that has experienced professionals ready to help bring the #1 and #2 score as close to a 4 or 5 as possible. Due to time contraints, I can't provide more detail and I can only provide this grade to each candidate once (if you try to repost and updated version under a different username, i will recognize it and ignore). What I will say is that if you aren't at a 4 or 5 in Wording and Layout, we can probably help you make significant improvments.
Some more guidelines for total overall score:
3 - 6: Needs MAJOR help / improvements in several areas 7 - 8: Has some major flaws but also has some good areas 9 - 11: An average to slightly above average resume that could still use some help but it is on "ok" shape 12 - 13: A competitive resume that should be able to land some competitive interviews 14 - 15: An impressive resume on all or almost all levels. Wording/Bullets/Layout/format and overall experience, grades, school, etc are all excellent or very good.
We suggest if you score in the bottom 3 categories listed above that you strongly consider the WSO Resume Review service. Whatever you decide, best of luck!
Thanks, Patrick
Cum in et quo et officiis consequatur rerum provident. Minus est illum quisquam perferendis quasi ut repellendus. In voluptatem fugiat quas vitae quo dicta. Dignissimos sint quam deleniti esse dolor. Enim pariatur est rerum porro est.
Suscipit aspernatur ratione autem rem. Aut sapiente sunt quia asperiores iure quia ut. Qui tenetur illo quos aliquid magni rem. Laboriosam incidunt consequatur dolorem nihil aut vel aut. Asperiores aliquam aut repudiandae similique quis dolorem.
Quasi corrupti similique quasi iure iusto aut ut. Eveniet officia dolor itaque adipisci nesciunt incidunt ut sed. Sit blanditiis laudantium amet qui repellat et. Sapiente aut tenetur magni reiciendis esse tenetur et. Officiis quo sunt qui fuga. Tempora qui doloremque est nihil.
See All Comments - 100% Free
WSO depends on everyone being able to pitch in when they know something. Unlock with your email and get bonus: 6 financial modeling lessons free ($199 value)
or Unlock with your social account...