Remove summary

Fix formatting. Your dates and GPAs are not aligned. Attention to detail dude…

Remove the highlighted part about vacation. No one cares

Quantify more and write bullets in “what, how” format. For example, you could switch it to “generated 15% returns over 8 weeks by optimizing blah blah blah”. Its good to quantify results

Congrats on the 200wpm. I’m at 120 on type racer and cannot imagine being any higher that that.

 

All three hyphens between your job titles and companies are formatted differently, pls fix.

Also, put your incoming EY internship in there. Just format it without bullets and write your job title as Incoming (job role). Having your first position be at EY vs Whataburger is a big upgrade.

 

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All three hyphens between your job titles and companies are formatted differently, pls fix.

Also, put your incoming EY internship in there. Just format it without bullets and write your job title as Incoming (job role). Having your first position be at EY vs Whataburger is a big upgrade.

Would I delete one of the job experiences? This is what it looks like so far. I deleted some stuff from the skills and awards section to fit the EY thing

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