Junior semi-target, need help

I'm a junior from a semi-target looking for some feedback on my resume. I'm looking for an internship either in IB or S&T, two areas I've really come to enjoy over the past 6 months or so. Let me know if you guys think anything should be changed, omitted or added.

http://www.razume.com/documents/13664

5 Comments
 
Best Response

I would condense the BS in Finance and BS in Econ part. I recieved a BS and usually you can only major in finance not get a degree (picky I know, don't think it is a huge deal)

Put your major GPA if it is better.

I would try and put more results achieved at your various positions rather than just saying what you did

Skills, where is this? Do you know any financial programs? Unix, Microsoft, C++, whatever? Are you in the investment club, anything?

I like the format though.

 

Overall looks decently solid. I would clean up the language though.

For instance, "Worked side by side..." sounds a little sophomoric, along with the following bullets.

Again the first line after your bullet needs to project professionalism, action, and results regardless of the content.

For example; I would say what you did running the frat: "Planned & scheduled bi-monthly chapter meetings and coordinated attendance of over 75 members -- Assessed & monitored chapters progress with fund raising, academic, new member, & community service goals -- Reported to national headquarters every fiscal quarter on spending & financial strength of chapter -- Led chapter to second highest cash surplus within XXX organization"

Ace all your PE interview questions with the WSO Private Equity Prep Pack: http://www.wallstreetoasis.com/guide/private-equity-interview-prep-questions
 
westfaldOverall looks decently solid. I would clean up the language though.

For instance, "Worked side by side..." sounds a little sophomoric, along with the following bullets.

Again the first line after your bullet needs to project professionalism, action, and results regardless of the content.

For example; I would say what you did running the frat: "Planned & scheduled bi-monthly chapter meetings and coordinated attendance of over 75 members -- Assessed & monitored chapters progress with fund raising, academic, new member, & community service goals -- Reported to national headquarters every fiscal quarter on spending & financial strength of chapter -- Led chapter to second highest cash surplus within XXX organization"

Exactly what I am talking about.

 

Quia tempore voluptas neque ullam ducimus. Et et consequatur consequatur cupiditate est nemo est. Vero quasi debitis itaque fugiat dolores. Aliquid dolor repudiandae ut cumque iste quos. Inventore et nihil vero autem vitae.

Est eius laudantium mollitia quaerat eveniet expedita blanditiis. Eaque excepturi delectus sequi alias ut rerum non.

Odit quaerat eveniet sed incidunt. Consectetur in suscipit eum ut sunt.

Career Advancement Opportunities

October 2026 Investment Banking

  • Evercore 01 99.5%
  • Moelis & Company 01 99.0%
  • JPMorgan 01 98.4%
  • Guggenheim Partners 02 97.9%
  • Morgan Stanley 06 97.4%

Overall Employee Satisfaction

October 2026 Investment Banking

  • Moelis & Company No 99.5%
  • Morgan Stanley 02 99.0%
  • Evercore 01 98.4%
  • Banco Santander 02 97.9%
  • BMO Capital Markets 13 97.4%

Professional Growth Opportunities

October 2026 Investment Banking

  • Evercore 01 99.5%
  • Moelis & Company 01 99.0%
  • Morgan Stanley 05 98.4%
  • Goldman Sachs 01 97.9%
  • JPMorgan No 97.4%

Total Avg Compensation

October 2026 Investment Banking

  • Vice President (16) $429
  • Associates (57) $264
  • 3rd+ Year Analyst (8) $210
  • 2nd Year Analyst (28) $184
  • Intern/Summer Associate (16) $161
  • 1st Year Analyst (84) $151
  • Intern/Summer Analyst (76) $101
notes
16 IB Interviews Notes

“... there’s no excuse to not take advantage of the resources out there available to you. Best value for your $ are the...”

Leaderboard

1
redever's picture
redever
99.2
2
Secyh62's picture
Secyh62
99.0
3
BankonBanking's picture
BankonBanking
99.0
4
kanon's picture
kanon
99.0
5
CompBanker's picture
CompBanker
98.9
6
DrApeman's picture
DrApeman
98.9
7
Betsy Massar's picture
Betsy Massar
98.9
8
dosk17's picture
dosk17
98.9
9
GameTheory's picture
GameTheory
98.9
10
bolo up's picture
bolo up
98.8
success
From 10 rejections to 1 dream investment banking internship

“... I believe it was the single biggest reason why I ended up with an offer...”