Rising senior at a complete non-target within close proximity to NYC, looking to send out my resume for a fall internship and eventually apply to some MFins...interested in S&T/AM. I am in the middle of a trading internship at a small boutique broker-dealer so there will be more to add/enhance that part of the resume, but that is the part I am looking for the most help...just want some advice on the bullets.
tear it apart please. thanks in advance
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Too short, too much white.
Under your finance experience, you need to expand.
Supported OTC desk by...doing what specifically? (List the tasks and their implications)
Created equity arb sheets for multiple exchanges...including which exchanges? Who read your sheet? What were the implications?
Used Bloomberg to build more sheets...the purpose of these sheets was? Who read them? What did they do with them? What specifically was included in these sheets? Did you do anything besides copy/paste? If so, include the analyses.
Monitored company filings, etc...and found what? What did you do when you found that info? Did you save the firm money? make them money? how much?
Back office...meh. I'd delete that one, or leave it as is. Not sure.
deleting the back office line seems right
No need to capitalize every letter in Bloomberg under certifications.
The third bullet point of your work experience should be expanded or consolidated because having the word "analyst" on a whole line in not appealing or easy on the eyes. Also no need for the tab under supercomputing conference.
And as jsmort mentioned, I would advice you to leave off the back office part or at least reword that bullet so it doesn't say back office twice in the same sentence.
Hope that helps
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