I need help on my CV for internships I will be applying to for spring in my 3rd year. So could please critique my CV please. CV- First Draft of CV_0.docx 25.05

These are just my opinion but some immediate things: 1. Eliminate the "Key Responsibilities" and "Key Skills" sub headlines. Just use bullets. - And can probably get rid of the lines under each item ie "Worked with Goldman Sachs, JP Morgan, Macquarie and HSBC on an online platform" IMO 2. Be more specific - ie "involved in workshops and seminars on investment banking". That's not compelling and doesn't tell me what you learned or actually did. 3. Think outside the box in ways you word all of your bullets ie.

Please could people critique my CV

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lalala12

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first of all, bright network should not be longer than 1 line on ur CV.

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