Please Critique my Resume - Boutique IB Internship
I am a junior at a non-target, and I've officially struck out on an IB summer analyst role for the well-known banks. I have a list of contacts at boutiques ready to send out emails to ask about any possible internship opportunities.
Please critique my resume. Looking forward to everyone's comments. Thank you
Sorry man nothing to add. It looks great, pm me when you get an offer — because you will.
Thank you! I appreciate it
Yeah honestly I‘d say it looks great. If you really want to push it that extra mile, check out M&I‘s resume improvement service. Might help, though it will cost you a bit.
You either have my resume, we've worked together, or every resume starts to look the same beyond a certain point. But what the fuck.
Regardless, the grammar is a little off throughout what you posted. And the selected transaction experience section looks odd to me -- I would break that up and make it an additional bullet if you're gonna include it. Granted, I'm an intern so take my advice with a grain of salt. Had some success doing it that way though. Also, some of your bullets say the same thing. "Sourced companies w three mil..." and "Prepared profiles of 1k companies..." are way too similar in my opinion. Maybe add more detail to differentiate the two or combine them. If you pick one of these things to fix though, make it the grammar. This reads as a draft
I guess most search funds provide the same experience? haha. Thank you so much for the advice, I appreciate it!
To an extent, yeah I'm sure they do. Still fairly confident that I could guess who you are based on the details.
Private message me then
Anonymous makes that tough
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